Blog post '2nd lyrics (Phase 2)'
2nd lyrics (Phase 2)
- Published: 448 days ago
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My vision for this is an edgy rock song, perhaps along the lines of Holly McNarland's 'Numb'
#2 Going Cold
Never asked for anything more
than I ought to
Why did it seem so much?
Never asked for anything more
than to be with him
Oh, but to him it was like work
He's gone too far, pushed me away
and yet he acts like everything is still ok...
Refrain
He makes me cold
He makes me go cold
Why would anyone want see me that way?
He makes me cold
He makes me go cold
They don't really know what they're in for
when I go cold...
Before now, I was
hopeful and waiting
for the crumbs that he'd throw to me.
Before now, I could
see possibilities
now the lie unravels and leaves me naked
He's gone too far, pushed me away
and yet he acts like everything is still ok...
Ref.
I can feel the change come over me
Spiralling down, fury rising
I can feel nothing for him now
He's crossed the line and there's
no going back
He went too far, pushed me away
it will never, ever again be ok...
Ref
#2 Going Cold
Never asked for anything more
than I ought to
Why did it seem so much?
Never asked for anything more
than to be with him
Oh, but to him it was like work
He's gone too far, pushed me away
and yet he acts like everything is still ok...
Refrain
He makes me cold
He makes me go cold
Why would anyone want see me that way?
He makes me cold
He makes me go cold
They don't really know what they're in for
when I go cold...
Before now, I was
hopeful and waiting
for the crumbs that he'd throw to me.
Before now, I could
see possibilities
now the lie unravels and leaves me naked
He's gone too far, pushed me away
and yet he acts like everything is still ok...
Ref.
I can feel the change come over me
Spiralling down, fury rising
I can feel nothing for him now
He's crossed the line and there's
no going back
He went too far, pushed me away
it will never, ever again be ok...
Ref
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bringmethemusic
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yes. I studied voice for six years and have been writing lyrics for about 11 years -
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so you write and sing???
