all the time has passed under the bridge

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continuing story add on to the previous persons parragraph

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cutegirl.jpg"i will wait for you" she said endlessly... she continues,"...and when you arrive, you will get what is coming to you.  he finally entered after what seemed to be an eternity.  all she had to say was, "I waited all this time and all you brought me was this stupid bracelet. well, i have something for you. say hello to my lil' fren'." she proceides to empty a clip into him heart. his last words, "tha, that was not th, the only thing i b, brought." with every word he spits blood. his teath now covered in a red film, a small stream forms out the corner of his mouth. he continues, "I brought you m, my heart.?" he dies with a look of wonderment on his face, never really knowing, why.

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  1. Leah
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    She rose from her chair and headed towards the door. The feeling she has was an uneasy one, as if something were wrong. Perhaps the knock wasn't real, was it all in her mind? She walked cautiously to the door, quietly so whoever stood waiting, watching, would not hear her footsteps. She approached and looked out the peep hole. No one stood on the other side. She thought to herself, maybe they went around to the side door, or perhaps she really didnt hear anything. She walked, again cautious and quite when she heard the front door squeak open. She turned to see the door cracked with no one and nothing in sight. walking to the door she whispered his name with question in her voice. He was in her thoughts and now she felt as if he was near again. She felt his presence, his hurt, his feelings of betrayal, the feelings she knew he must have felt when he died, looking at, to him, the most beautiful face he had ever seen. The last face he saw before the life slipped away from him. Then she saw him.......
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    she awakes with a start and a faint cry.. her body sheathed in a cold sweat. a year has past since that night, yet she can still see his eyes, frozen wide. can still smell the nauseating stench of burnt gunpowder mixed with the metallic odor of blood. can still hear those words echoing in the confines of her mind.. "i brought you.. my heart." what had she done? had he truly loved her as his dying breath professed? she will never know. Her world swirled around her as her mind brought her back to that time..
    he had been gone for so long. five years without a letter, a call.. still, she had kept her word. for five long years she had remained true to him. saved herself for him. in that time, neither, heart, nor mind lingered on any man but he. Then, finally, she received news! Her love was alive and well! he had traveled the world, and would be returning to her soon! But there was more. He was whispered have become a hard man. Cool and unforgiving as the winds that had taken him away. Yet surely this was false, as those same winds had now returned him to her. she was alone in her parlor when a knock startled her from her thoughts…

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    love it!!!